In my view, a successful writing group is one where the #1 goal is to make everybody’s writing stronger while giving other writers license to accept or reject our recommendations
I have been blessed with belonging to two such groups, one that still keeps in touch and meets socially, while the other – First Page – is still going strong after 6 years. We meet every two weeks at someone’s house and take turns giving feedback and having a discussion about two submissions of twenty pages or less each. Since we’re only 7 members, our turns come up fairly often!
Thanks everyone! My writing and my stories are so much stronger than they would be were I still taking this long journey alone. We’ve come a long way together, haven’t we?
Happy news: two First Page members have books coming out!
Michelle, we’re so proud of what you’ve accomplished! TUD was already very good when we read it as submissions, and now that you’ve added more of the insights you and Frankie’s father have gained along the way, your memoir is simply superb!
Second good news: Arif Anwar’s debut novel, The Storm, will be available in Canada (Harper Collins Canada) on March 13th, 2018, and in the US (Simon & Shuster), on May 15th, 2018. Pre-order at all major online bookstores!
More happy news: Michelle Boone, another member, had a short story published in The Danforth Review earlier this year. It’s called Full Submission. Read it here!
And this post wouldn’t be complete without mentioning Susan Doherty Hannaford, member of my first writing group, whose first novel, A Secret Music, came out in 2015, is the Winner of the 2016 Grace Irwin Prize and was shortlisted for the 2017 Frank Hegyi Award for Emerging Authors! Publisher: Cormorant Books. Again!
Committing career suicide, whether deliberately or accidentally, has figured in all three of Mark Sampson’s novels to date. In the very serious and aptly titled Sad Peninsula, first-person narrator Michael finds himself teaching English to children in Korea after knowingly sabotaging his livelihood as a journalist back home in Eastern Canada. In The Slip, first-person narrator Philip Sharpe shares with us, his dear readers, the gaffe he unknowingly commits on live TV and the week-and-a-bit of mayhem, both hilarious and sad, that ensues.
How does a woman’s abduction affect a small community? Rebecca Rosenblum’s So Much Love explores the multi-faceted aspects of this horrendous act through the eyes of the people most affected by Catherine Reindeer’s disappearance, including her mother, her husband, her co-workers, a university professor and, of course, Catherine’s own eyes.
Novel 2 is starting to take shape. I have narrowed down the location, Korea again, and the era, the Joseon dynasty, most specifically the first half of the 17th century.
I have even written 5 pages of the first draft, the one where I’m supposed to discover the actual story. No idea where it’s going.
My main character will be a woman, this much I know, and she will of course wear the hanbok. So, I’m researching hanbok styles and this has led me to think about other traditional dresses of Asia that are still worn today on special occasions: lush saris, colourful kimonos and classy cheongsams (qipao).
Period dramas, whether on the big or small screen, bring these fabulous dresses into our lives. Think of Wong Kar Wai’s In the Mood for Love and the slow, simmering and sensual— moody—relationship that develops between Tony Leung and Maggie Cheung’s characters in 1960s Hong Kong. Maggie wears no less than 21 cheongsams,beautifully chronicled by Foam of days blogger, Julia, in 2013. My favourite is the black (at times it looks like dark navy in the film) and white floral cheongsam Julia calls dress # 15.
Cheongsams, it must be acknowledged, dates back only to the 1920s whereas the other dress styles have a much longer history.
The various pieces of the hanbok for women are described in this card:
A short video shows how to don the wrap-around skirt, the chima, and tie the ribbon of the jeogori and can be found here.
I wasn’t able to uncover much concerning undergarments (!) but I have seen simple white bloomers worn under, and at times in lieu of, petticoat.
This painting also shows how the skirt can be kilted up mid-body so it doesn’t trail in the dust. More on the painter of Woman in a Red Hat below.
On first seeing a woman wearing a hanbok, many people’s’ first impression is that the dress makes the female figure look shapeless, bloated and unflattering. Some hanbok variations have chimas with wide bands tied around the breasts rather than on top. Supremely classy actress Lee Young-ae wears one such hanbok in this picture:
In addition to painting Woman in a Red Hat, eighteenth century painter Shin Yun-bok, also known as Hyewon, gave the world the iconic Portrait of a Beauty.
Here again the chima is tied around the breasts rather than above. How mysterious our Beauty looks as she ties her otgoreum! Arguably Korea’s equivalent to The Mona Lisa.
There is yet another, saucier way to tie a chima: below the breasts. Many a painter of bawdy books circulating in Joseon era Korea served up that particular version to the men who bought their one-of-a-kind offerings!
One of the fundamental differences between hanbok and sari on the one hand, and kimono and cheongsam on the other, is the extent to which they restrict the wearer’s movements. A woman wearing a kimono takes small steps and, in the context of traditional Japanese architecture, with low tables and no chair, sits with her knees folded under her.
Cheongsams are definitely not designed for sitting on the floor but they nevertheless impose restrictions to movement whether sitting on a chair or a sofa (or a bed!) – legs close together or crossed – and when walking – measured steps, never racing.
A woman wearing a hanbok is freer to walk at a brisk pace. When she sits on the floor or on the ground, it is in the more relaxed cross-legged position.
A variation on the cross-legged position is the cross squat as in this photo:
It is often a position of power, such as when the female head of a household discusses family matters with her husband.
I confess not knowing much about the sari but a quick search shows that women can ride astride a horse in a sari. The same goes for the hanbok. Here again, the painting is by Shin Yun-bok and the women are riding on mules rather than horses, I believe.
South Korean President Park Geun-hye wears her country’s traditional hanbok for all formal occasions.
Elements of the hanbok have inspired fashion in Korea and abroad recently, such as in this 2011 example from designer Carolina Herrera:
A particularly stunning hanbok-inspired dress was worn by Jeon Ji-hyun’s character, Cheon Song-yi, in a pivotal red-carpet scene in the final episode of television series My Love from Another Star.
Classic, yet so simple.
Ooops! No time left to work on the actual novel today.
Research … sigh.
 The Joseon dynasty kings ruled Korea from 1392 to 1910